Interim 1 just ended today for me, and although i didn't managed to post the storyboards in time for presentation, i got a good feedback.
Alan remarked that the camera angels needed to be more interesting and at different angles, so i'll need to work on that again. the character designs also need to be complete, but i already have a rough idea on what to make them look like.
Alan also suggested that in the last part where the girl fights back, that she whips out a whistle to blow for help and police swarm out of nowhere. i thought that be interesting at first, but that would also mean i'd might have to design and animate more characters to be policemen. i'll have to seriously consider this....
blogger refuses to upload my ninja character, i'll try again later soon
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